Rough Cut Crit. Notes

Raise Grandmother's audio and lower the music Jerry suggested we add a third song at the end Medals need to be shown longer Put in a description of live radio feed at beginning Consider a climax Shanti said we should zoom in on Lei Anh's interview Need more focus on family aspect of the film …

Intro/Conclusion

Intro Brief summary of 9066 and the info of why Japanese were put into internment camps during WWII. Conclusion Compare political aspects of internment during WWII with immigration laws of 21st century.    

Story Structure

Since we can't control when or what our interviewees are speaking about we've decided to break up the interviews in chunks based off the main topics we'd like to show. Storyboard chapters: Life post war with grandmother, life pre war with grandfather War draft (cards from WWI & II), release draft card 442nd infantry dvd & …

Interview Q’s

What was your family doing before Pearl Harbor was attacked? What was the cause of the Japanese internment during WWII? What is Executive Order 9066? What happened to all your family's belongings when they were sent to the camps? Do you know if all your family was sent to the same camp? Which camps were …

Approach

Production Team Name: Celluloid Commandos Film Title: 9066 LMW1 Final Pitch: Topic: Executive Order 9066 Story: The interviewees have personal history during and after this historical event and will relay personal information of past experiences and relevant information pertaining to the time of internment during WWII. Approach Reflexive Documentary The story will be told through interviewees, …

Voice Over

Script My name is Lei Anh Drake and I've been tasked with telling a story of my own choosing. I want to share my Japanese family history and by doing so I've come to question how much the rest of my family actually knows about our family history. To rectify the problem I'm making this …